10% 2d animations, soundtrack, rendering. Try a slight transparency on ghost so it isn’t distracting. Or off-white or gray. Or less opaque on edges not in middle. Or feather a mask. — he needs to appear to be part of the scene / environment. Keep it consistent whatever you do. Title looks great. Doll face: cool blue fill on darker side, or shift volume light to even out shading. Register the ghost in doll’s eye, in extreme closeup of doll face. Keep camera shake more like jello, centered, less camera movement. Lens on girl owner of doll house, use a wider angle camera lens to catch more of the environment. Could opening/closing of door happen more slowly.
10% 2d animations, soundtrack, rendering. Try a slight transparency on ghost so it isn’t distracting. Or off-white or gray. Or less opaque on edges not in middle. Or feather a mask. — he needs to appear to be part of the scene / environment. Keep it consistent whatever you do. Title looks great. Doll face: cool blue fill on darker side, or shift volume light to even out shading. Register the ghost in doll’s eye, in extreme closeup of doll face. Keep camera shake more like jello, centered, less camera movement. Lens on girl owner of doll house, use a wider angle camera lens to catch more of the environment. Could opening/closing of door happen more slowly.
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